Just sitting in a motel in Cache Creek reading your story thanks to the miracle of wireless internet. Excellent story, very poignant. You get across Connor's loneliness so clearly. He's interacting with Gunn and Fred, but has to hold himself apart from them. He may look like a teenager, but had to grow up so quickly. Ah, and that final line - both a promise and a threat.
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Excellent story, very poignant. You get across Connor's loneliness so clearly. He's interacting with Gunn and Fred, but has to hold himself apart from them. He may look like a teenager, but had to grow up so quickly.
Ah, and that final line - both a promise and a threat.