I love it! Especially the Angel and Buffy crossover bits -- the Petrellis absolutely have Wolfram & Harts ties, and a father figured exchange between Buffy and Claire would be gooooold. I love banter between Noah and Buffy, and, of course, how completely wrong she got everything.

I have to admit, though, I thought that Hiro was going to be harassed by Star Trek's Department of Temporal affairs from breaking the Temporal Prime Directive.