I really enjoyed this fic, especially the allusions to (what would be)future canon. Hiro was adorable - I love how he communicates in Star Wars quotes (i ♥ SW).
The characters interactions were done very well. I would of liked a bit more Nathan and Claire interaction (it seamed like he kept giving her to someone else top hold), but the interaction that you did write was extremely sweet. I love that it's Nathan who gets the promise from Jean-Pierre not to erase Claire's memories.
I hope you don't mind that I rec'd (http://atomic89.livejournal.com/52778.html) your fic at my lj.
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The characters interactions were done very well. I would of liked a bit more Nathan and Claire interaction (it seamed like he kept giving her to someone else top hold), but the interaction that you did write was extremely sweet. I love that it's Nathan who gets the promise from Jean-Pierre not to erase Claire's memories.
I hope you don't mind that I rec'd (http://atomic89.livejournal.com/52778.html) your fic at my lj.