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Title: Brave New World.

Disclaimer: Owned by NBC.

Spoilers: Massive for Five Years Gone

Summary: Sylar is grateful. To everyone, really, but especially to Nathan and Peter Petrelli.

Rating: PG-13. Various Sylarian activities referenced, naturally.

Thanks to: [livejournal.com profile] resolute for beta-reading.

Timeline: leading into the future as shown in Five Years Gone.





Brave New World

In the end, he was grateful to them. They had all helped him. Everyone, from pathetic Brian Davis onward. Even Hiro Nakamura, so eager to save people that he never wondered why a woman who could look like anyone she wanted would need to hide. Hiro had taken “Candace” to Bennet, who wasn’t nearly as naïve and seemed to have something of a hostile history with Candace anyway. But that, too, had turned into an advantage. Bennet had turned Candace over to the government without hesitation; he obviously had some sort of arrangement with Matt Parkman. Sylar didn’t even have to work to be brought to a locked area full of people who couldn’t use their gifts nearly as much as he did; they were delivered to him free of charge. He felt like a kid in a candystore, he truly did. And then, oh, then.

Really, the Petrellis had been the most helpful of the lot. If Peter Petrelli had not exploded and managed to wipe out half of New York – and wasn’t it typical that this mass of insecurities had not managed to get a grip on his talents, which Sylar so effortlessly managed to? – if Nathan Petrelli had not told all and sundry that it had been Sylar who was responsible, and therefore dead, why, then this brave new world which was Sylar’s for the taking would never have existed. He’d still be reduced to hunting down one undeservingly gifted person at a time, would have been bothered by those various insects who thought they could bring down the most extraordinary person of their time.

It was only fitting that he thank them properly.

In spite of various accusations, Sylar was not insane. An insane person would have gone after Peter Petrelli and his unwarranted collection of powers. No, Sylar was practical, first and foremost. The thrill of the hunt not withstanding, it really wasn’t worth the effort if you could have all the resources of the world’s most powerful nation at your disposal to do your work. So he went for the older brother; that ever so successful Congressman and source of inspiration for the population at large, chief instigator of the Linderman bill, the running mate of the President-elect, Nathan Petrelli. Nathan Petrelli was about to become Vice President. Clearly, his career could need another push.

Sylar posed as various members of Petrelli’s staff for a while, to get the hang of the man’s mannerisms, day-to-day habits and important relationships; the mechanisms which made Petrelli tick. He couldn’t afford to be sloppy. True, at this point it was unlikely that anyone would be able to discover and stop him, but Sylar was a perfectionist. He despised amateurism of any kind. No, he was an artist.

The actual kill would be a work of art, too. After all, it was a matter of gratitude; Nathan Petrelli had made it all possible. It wouldn’t do to just let one of the servants surprise him. There were various candidates available, and for a while, Sylar thought he’d choose Mohinder Suresh, if only because it annoyed him that Mohinder had attached himself to the elder Petrelli. Well, that would soon turn to Sylar’s advantage, too. But Mohinder would not have enough of an impact on Nathan Petrelli. No, it would have to be someone Nathan Petrelli really wanted to see, would be desperate to see. It would have to be someone Nathan Petrelli had not seen for a while.

Due to the little waitress in Texas, Sylar had an eidetic memory. He didn’t have to look at the photos that stood around, those photos the public relations people had tried in vain to get rid of in their ongoing effort to disassociate their employer from a rumoured terrorist. Sylar gave up his latest disguise, Petrelli’s former campaign manager, and reconstructed the features he recalled all too clearly, bit for bit. Then he folded them into the expressions he remembered. The first one was panicked, but that wouldn’t do; angry would, but that might spoil the surprise a little. Sad, he finally decided. Yes. Sad, and perhaps somewhat longing, longing for a lost past.

Having rearranged his features to his satisfaction, Sylar entered the study where the soon to be Vice President was busy brooding over the latest reports of terrorist activities in California and Nevada. Petrelli looked up, and Sylar, who had assumed he had by now studied every expression the man was capable of having, enough to make his imitation flawless, was surprised and delighted to find out there were a few more. It proved he had made the correct choice for the final blow.

There was the expected surprise, of course, and some disbelief; but there was also something so strong that it melted all the careful, waxen man-of-strength square-jawed blandness Sylar was familiar with away. What remained was a mixture of pain and joy that was bereft of any moderation, and Sylar, who had made it his business to study this man, felt for a brief moment absurdly betrayed, as if Nathan Petrelli had deliberately holding out on him.

Well. It just proved Sylar had made the right choice to wrap his gift in, that last gift Petrelli would ever receive. Time to properly thank him for his part in helping Sylar to fulfill his destiny. Then there would be another expression, a last one, when dear old Nathan realized what his visitor had really come for.

But first, this. “Nathan,” said Sylar, and decided that since on the few occasions he had heard him speak, Peter Petrelli always had an undertone of confusion in his voice, this would do here as well.

It seemed his brother agreed. When Nathan replied, that rasping voice was a bit deeper than usual; something to use in the future. After all, the leader of the free world should sound a bit more… committed than Nathan Petrelli usually did.

“Peter,” he said. “Pete.”

If Sylar ever did feel the need to catch up with the younger Petrelli, he’d know exactly how to thank Peter as well.

Date: 2007-05-03 07:03 pm (UTC)
g_shadowslayer: (Default)
From: [personal profile] g_shadowslayer
You are an evil, evil person, you know. You do realize that, right?

I loved this! Excellent analysis of Sylar's feelings on the whole thing, too -- especially the last part. Eeek!

Date: 2007-05-03 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
I am completely aware of that.*g*

And hey, that's the joy of fanfic and canon AUs - you can do horrible things to your beloved characters while being able to tell yourself that it won't happen...

Date: 2007-05-03 07:15 pm (UTC)
wychwood: chess queen against a runestone (Default)
From: [personal profile] wychwood
Yes! You are assimilated!!

*bookmarks until after watching the episode*

Date: 2007-05-03 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
I got infected during the hiatus and have been writing flailing reviews for the weeks. The Borg have nothing on Heroes!

Date: 2007-05-03 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] author-by-night.livejournal.com
Oh. My. God. Brilliant.'

I love how you captured Sylar's true evilness in this; no insanity, no doubt, no redemption.

And it makes Nathan's death even more tragic - his last words, theoretically, were in kindness to his brother. This also works with Peter always knowing Sylar was posing as Nathan.

Date: 2007-05-03 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
Regarding Peter, my own impression was that he had not figured it until actually meeting Sylar-as-Nathan, but yes, it works either way (and I think the show leaves enough room for either interpretation, too).

The Petrellis are probably my favourite characters on the show, so naturally, I had to imagine what happened to Nathan even worse than what we were told. Such is the way of the fanfic writer.*g*

Date: 2007-05-03 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damedbx.livejournal.com
wow! i love your fic. your words roll out. it's a great fic! really mastered the inbetween of Five Years Gone.
:D

Date: 2007-05-04 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Date: 2007-05-04 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damedbx.livejournal.com
You are welcome! :D

Date: 2007-05-03 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indyhat.livejournal.com
Ooh, liked this!

Sylar, who had made it his business to study this man, felt for a brief moment absurdly betrayed, as if Nathan Petrelli had deliberately holding out on him.

Very nice :)

Date: 2007-05-04 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
Thank you for the feedback!

Date: 2007-05-03 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 12-12-12.livejournal.com
This works so well. Of *course* Sylar killed Nathan disguised as Peter--it's the only situation where Nathan would let his guard down. I love it.

Date: 2007-05-04 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
It was something that occured to me when I wondered how Nathan must have died, and then I recalled Sylar taunting Peter during the showdown by calling him "Pete" (which only Nathan does on occasion on this show), and I had a ficlet to write...

Date: 2007-05-03 09:09 pm (UTC)
kernezelda: (Default)
From: [personal profile] kernezelda
Very nice indeed. I like Sylar's voice here, and his self-image, and how off he is in his disconnection.

I'd thought for a moment he chose Claire's form, but Peter's is of course the best - the person Nathan's loved the best and longest in his life.

Date: 2007-05-04 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
I'm not sure why my first fanfiction in this fandom is the pov of a psychopathic serial killer, but that's how it worked out, and somehow I'm not that surprised....

Claire would also have been a possibility, as he obviously knows in Five Years Gone she's Nathan's daughter (meaning either this is public knowledge by then or he found out while stalking Nathan), but yes, he'd go for the longest and most intimate connection, hence Peter.

Date: 2007-05-03 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greyelveneyes.livejournal.com
OH.

OH WOW.

I LOVE when people get into Sylar's head so WELL. *nodnod*

He's so...EVIL. And I LOVE it! This is such a great...just, wow. Srsly, they should have put something just like this in the episode.

+mem

Date: 2007-05-04 03:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
If they had put a flashback of Sylar killing Nathan in Peter's form on the show, I'd still be wimpering, so I'm somewhat glad they left it to me and fanfic.*g* Thank you!

Date: 2007-05-03 11:30 pm (UTC)
wychwood: chess queen against a runestone (Default)
From: [personal profile] wychwood
Sylar didn’t even have to work to be brought to a locked area full of people who couldn’t use their gifts nearly as much as he did; they were delivered to him free of charge. He felt like a kid in a candystore, he truly did. And then, oh, then.

Oh, wow. Yes. This I really can believe. How horribly right.

Great story.

Date: 2007-05-04 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
It's somewhat that hit me when I wondered about the timing of events, i.e. when Sylar killed Candace and took her gift, and how he'd use it pre-impersonating Nathan. Because Candace really would have no need for Hiro or Bennet to help her go underground - but Sylar would have exploited that to get to all those specials in one spot...

Date: 2007-05-04 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meli-64.livejournal.com
Brilliant. So evil. Great job!

Date: 2007-05-04 03:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2007-05-04 05:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wysiwygot.livejournal.com
You are one twisted lady. This was excellent. I ate up every word.


... Mmmm, Sylar.

Date: 2007-05-04 08:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
I guess the fact that my first fanfic in this fandom is a serial killer pov doesn't surprise anyone, huh? *g*

Date: 2007-05-04 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] butterflyweb.livejournal.com
That was wicked.

I love the cool, collected, insanity that colors Sylar's thoughts. I like how you described the process, the steps he took, the measures to achieve perfection in his deception. And I adore the claims of sanity.

But my absolute favorite has to be:

and Sylar, who had made it his business to study this man, felt for a brief moment absurdly betrayed, as if Nathan Petrelli had deliberately holding out on him.

Wonderful job of getting into Sylar's head. :DD

Date: 2007-05-04 08:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
Writing insane characters in a believable way is a great - and fun - challenge. Thanks for the feedback!

Date: 2007-05-04 10:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattahj.livejournal.com
Awesome. I love that such good fic came out of this ep.

Date: 2007-05-04 11:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
I thought I wouldn't write any Heroes fanfic until the season is over, but that episode just called out to me...

Date: 2007-05-06 06:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cadesama.livejournal.com
Just so you know, this is canon now. You've got a pitch perfect Sylar voice, but I particularly love this bit: ", and Sylar, who had made it his business to study this man, felt for a brief moment absurdly betrayed, as if Nathan Petrelli had deliberately holding out on him."

You can just feel Sylar's frustration with observation. He's good at it, but he learns so much more by cracking them open and looking inside.

Date: 2007-05-06 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
Oh, I hoped this would meet with your approval!

...and that seems to be everyone's favourite line, including mine.*g*

Date: 2007-05-06 09:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
Great story, and it's absolutely making sense! Woah.

Date: 2007-05-06 09:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
I suppose it says something about my inherent evilness that as soon as I wondered how Nathan actually died, I immediately thought of this.*g* Thanks for the feedback!

Date: 2007-05-07 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostandalone22.livejournal.com
Very well written. You've got Sylar's voice done well, and what a thing to lure Nathan in with. Nice job.

Date: 2007-05-07 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
Somehow, the worst thing to do to Nathan seemed to be the logical method Sylar would use. Thanks for the feedback!

Date: 2007-05-20 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheepfairy.livejournal.com
The way you write Sylar is so perfect - he's just so creepily rational, in his own way.

Also, I hadn't even thought about how helpful Charlie's ability would be in adjusting to Nathan's life and remembering all of those little individual habits and interpersonal relationships. Genius.

Thanks!

Date: 2007-05-20 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
Also, I hadn't even thought about how helpful Charlie's ability would be in adjusting to Nathan's life and remembering all of those little individual habits and interpersonal relationships.

Yes, because in that case, it's not enough to just look like Nathan, he has to be a convincing Nathan to everyone Nathan is dealing with on a day to day basis, at the very least. When I thought about how he accomplished that, the fact he has Charlie's memory came immediately to mind...

Date: 2007-05-21 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rotten-fish.livejournal.com
Just great! So well-put together, and Sylar's voice in it is fantastic.

Date: 2007-05-21 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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