You know, episodes 8 and 9 confirmed a strange phenomenon for me as far as
Carnivale is concerned. This is the first show I like where I tend to regard the episodes written by the show's creator (as a solo effort, not the ones he cowrites with others) as sub par. 8 was a Daniel Knauf solo episode and it illustrated what
kradical said at the beginning of this season regarding the opening episode - Knauf just can't do subtle. 9 was written by another writer, and I loved it.
Mind you, I still think this show never quite recovered from the loss of Ronald Moore. (And the contrast to the Moore-shepherded BSG makes that ever more obvious.) I'm buying the first season on DVD, but I'll be perfectly content with the second just on CD. This being said, there is are a lot of great things happening this season, the "good side" is getting far more fleshed out, the narrative pace has sped up, Ben simply rocks, and it's probably far more the kind of show Daniel Knauf wanted from the beginning, good versus evil. It's my own fault for having been more intrigued by storylines like Justin's from last season. But let's go into details, both good and evil:
( Of Prophets and Miracles ) ***
Another show whose creator, Terry Nation, was arguably not as good a writer of its episodes as the show's story editor, Chris Boucher (Terry fans, don't devour me - he's a jewel of subtlety compared with Mr. Knauf) is
Blake's 7. Gone these many decades, produced on a tiny budget by the BBC that was the leftover from some soap opera, and still alive and floroushing in fandom. Not least because it has fans like
watervole, aka Judith Proctor, who maintains
the best B7 site on the net and is among many other things an excellent fanfic author.
(In her spare time, she organizes conventions, trips to the theatre to watch Our Heroes on stage, and lures unsuspecting continentals into singing out loud at conventions despite the fact they can't sing, but that's neither here nor there.)
Judith has this amazing knack of being able to write the B7 characters both in their natural surroundings and in other worlds. My absolutely favourite story of hers was originally a fanzine but now is thankfully online. It's theoretical premise would have made me extremely wary if the author had been anyone else, because it's a crossover with a miniseries I had not then seen (I have since, again thanks to Judith), and it uses one of those fanfic tropes which can go badly so easily, i.e. the fact that the same actor, Gareth Thomas, played Blake and Morgan, the character we get to meet in this story.
(Sidenote here: Gareth Thomas' performance as Morgan in
Morgan's Boy is amazing, not because this is a very different character from Blake but because it's one of the most intense bits of acting I ever saw on tv or elsewhere. But you can, as I did, enjoy Judith's story without having seen said performance - she gives all the necessary information you need about Morgan in her story.)
"Morgan" is set in Wales and describes the encounter between two very damaged and very different men; one of whom is Avon, and though the why and wherefore of his being there isn't revealed until the end, it makes complete sense within the B7 universe. It's a gen story with a firm sense of place and atmosphere, a credible Avon (who shares the fact of all beloved and ambiguous characters of often gettig whitewashed or, tough much more rarely the other extreme, getting demonized), and it is my very favourite PGP. (Only B7 fans know what this means.)
My second favourite Judith story uses a classic Western as its template -
"Shane". It's another PGP and contains a brilliant use of Blake's clone from
Weapon and the family he was about to found at this episode. Blake's clone isn't exactly unused in fanfic, but it's great to see him with his own personality and priorities, similar to Blake but definitely not identical. As for that other B7 character, if you can't guess who "Shane" is in this scenario within the first page or so, shame on you. The child narrator sounds perfectly plausible as well, no mean feat to pull off.
Another thing which endears Judith to me as a writer is that she's not only a Blake/Avon (and Blake 'n Avon) fan but fascinated by the dynamic between Avon and Servalan as well. (In my humble opinion, it's what largely drives the third and fourth season of B7.) Her story
"The Third Option" describes a plausible PGP encounter between Avon and Servalan which captures everything that made this relationship so intriguing to me, despite the fact that Avon is amnesiac and brainwashed at this point. (And Servalan's reaction to that is so utterly her.)
If ever a poem was obvious to be quoted in a B7 context, it was Oscar Wilde's
The Ballad of Reading Goal. Judith's
story of the same name gives us Vila's point of view not just on Blake and Avon, but on Avon and himself. Again, you have something that could have gone so wrong - extensive use of poetry quotes is just as dangerous as song fic - and goes so right instead.
Speaking of songfic; as hinted at earlier in this rave, music is dear to Judith's heart, and she's the queen of filk in B7 fandom. It's hard to pick among her little masterpieces, but here are two ensemble pieces:
"Liberator Live Forever" filks the ode to joy, and
"Messing about in a Space Ship" ( "
Who cares that Blake is a trifle obsessed,/ As long as Kerr Avon wears studs on his vest?") takes on "Messing about on a River". I dare you not to hum at least one of them. Judith will make you. She is that way.